- Not enough contrast - especially the dark red subtext.
- Words may be too tight together.
The following two designs are now my working drafts:

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A wisp of smoke maybe?
Not sure about this next one:
This one is semi-interesting:
I started this one a few months ago, before I realised that it was too childish and unprofessional looking for a professional website. Also, users might mistake it for a button. Nevertheless, I still like it for some reason:
Both participants stated that the text was too small to read comfortably. Although it is possible to increase the size of most text within the browser, neither of the two participants knew about this function. Regardless, anything that takes the user extra time to accomplish, is likely to detract from their overall experience with that site.
The large site logo, found only on the “home” page, immediately drew the attention of both participants. Additionally, Paul stated that the logo added a lot to the web site’s visual appeal, whilst Ellie thought it was “ok”. The fact that it is only found on the “home” page means that it cannot take over the site and possibly detract from the experience.
Another minor issue discovered was that the “phone number” field on the contact form was a required one. Ellie explained that she would enter a false number more often than not. Perhaps this field could be left as not required, because from the Netdogz standpoint, there is no reason to collect false information from users when they don’t have to. That way, only users who wish to be contacted by phone will enter their phone number.
Both participants decided that they liked this web site due to its appealing colour scheme and overall layout. From the three web sites tested, this one rated the best among participants.
There were no complaints about text size for this site. This leads me to assume that the text is of a reasonable size - taking into account that it is black text, against a white background.
The most appealing feature of this web site was its scrolling design preview at the top of each page. Both participants said that this feature drew their attention immediately; also both decided that they liked the feature. When clicked, the scrolling preview leads users to the “Portfolio” page. One participant, Paul, said that he really liked this page.
On the downside, the colour scheme was displeasing to one participant, whilst the other made no comment on it.
One participant complained of small text size.
Both participants said that they liked the rollover effects in the main navigation menu at the top of the page.
Both participants said that they liked the web site’s colour scheme.
Unfortunately, both participants decided that the portfolio page was poor compared to the previous two sites. This was due to the fact that no image previews of the web site designs were included – only links to the respective sites. This increases the amount of time it takes for users to get an idea of the types of designs that the company creates.
Each participant criticised the site, with comments such as:
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Hi, _______. My name is Anthony, and I will be walking you through this session.
Let me explain why we’re here today: I’m testing three web sites to see what they are like for actual people to use. I want to make it clear that we’re testing the sites, not you. You can’t do anything wrong here so don’t worry about making mistakes.
Also, don’t worry about hurting my feelings because I didn’t create the pages you’re going to look at. I want to improve on these sites with my own future design, so I need to know honestly what you think.
As we go along, I’m going to ask you to think out loud, to tell me what’s going through your mind.
If you have questions, just ask. I may not be able to answer them right away, since I’m interested in how people do when they don’t have someone sitting next to them, but I will try to answer any questions you still have when we’re done.
You may have noticed the microphone. With your permission, I’m going to record what happens on the computer screen and what you have to say. The recording will be used only to help me figure out how to improve on the sites, and won’t be seen or heard by anyone except my university instructor and myself. It also helps me, because I don’t have to take as many notes.
If you would, I’m going to ask you to sign something for me. It simply says that I have your permission to record you, but that it will only be used by my university instructor, and myself. Do you have any questions before we begin?
Before we look at the sites, I’d like to ask you just a few quick questions.
http://www.darwinwebdesign.com.au
http://www.focuswebdesign.com.au
Ok. That concludes the session. Thank you very much for assisting me today.
| Male | 3 | 43% |
| Female | 4 | 57% |
| Total Respondents | 7 | 100% |
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| Student | 5 | 71% |
| Self-employed/Business owner | 5 | 71% |
| Employed (full or part time) | 2 | 29% |
| Homemaker | 1 | 14% |
| Pensioner | 1 | 14% |
| Some university | 6 | 86% |
| Some post graduate | 1 | 14% |
| Total | 7 | 100% |
| 11-20 | 1 | 14% |
| More than 20 | 6 | 86% |
| Total | 7 | 100% |
| 2 | 1 | 14% |
| 3 | 1 | 14% |
| 7 | 1 | 14% |
| 8 | 1 | 14% |
| 9 | 1 | 14% |
| 10 | 1 | 14% |
| 15+ | 1 | 14% |
| Total | 7 | 100% |
| Shopping | 6 | 86% |
| Banking | 7 | 100% |
| | 7 | 100% |
| Chat/IM | 4 | 57% |
| Academic Research | 7 | 100% |
| Product/service research | 6 | 86% |
| Games | 3 | 43% |
| Promoting a business | 3 | 43% |
| Conducting a business | 4 | 57% |
| 1 | Secure transactions, Professional look/feel |
| 2 | Quality of content, quality of products & service, overall design (looks like it's been made by a pro / amateur etc), ease of navigation, security (payments etc). |
| 3 | secure banking facilities - names that I know and trust |
| 4 | clear navigation and/or instructions |
| 5 | paypal, shopping cart, telephone number contact details address |
| 6 | Like to see a known company, contact details, abn, business address, prices (some want to hide their prices). I like fluid designs: CSS usually makes a site easier to use and faster to load whereas frames and tables dramatically increase loading times and are problematic. Especially on shopping sites flash can be a real problem; the simpler the site the better that's why ebay is so effective: it's just html & CSS. |
| 7 | personal info about the people who work there and their willingness / speediness in answering email queries about the product / service. contact info i guess. |
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| 1 | Secure transactions |
| 2 | Quality of products and service |
| 3 | security |
| 4 | what website features? or have I missed something |
| 5 | paypal |
| 6 | definitely CSS for layout |
| 7 | person to person communication |
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| 1 | Broken images and links, Splash screens, Slow email response |
| 2 | Not enough products / product info, no assurance of secure payment |
| 3 | too difficult to navigate |
| 4 | pop up ads, unclear navigation and/or instructions |
| 5 | no contact details or phone number |
| 6 | Do not like broken links on shopping sites eg: woolworths homshop (either their webmaster is overworked or just not keeping up). Slow loading pages (frames and tables) and very poor search tool eg: coles online.. the search usually crashes the site if you try to search for more than one word. |
| 7 | too many pages for transaction, slow downloads, self-important marketese and not enough info about product(including tiny images) etc. |
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11. Do you currently have a business website?
| Yes | 3 | 43% |
| No | 4 | 57% |
| Total | 7 | 100% |
12. Which of the following services would you consider paying for (tick all that apply)?
| Website design | 3 | 43% |
| Website re-design | 2 | 29% |
| Logo design | 4 | 57% |
| Shopping cart system | 6 | 86% |
| Content management system | 4 | 57% |
13. What would be your preferred payment option for such services?
| Easy online estimate, followed by pre-arranged quote | 6 | 86% |
| Other - Online Estimate with follow-up discussion and quote | 1 | 14% |
| Total | 7 | 100% |
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